Maui a great mythical hero

This week we have been learning about how to write using Persuasive writing. I wrote about Maui being a great mythical hero. Here it is: 

Introduction: I believe that Maui is a great mythical hero.

Reason 1: My first reason is that Maui helps people a lot because he is a kind of demi-god.

Reason 2: Secondly, he had superhuman strength because he was a strong and powerful demi-god.

Reason 3: Finally, he had a magical, powerful fish-hook that he used to pull islands out of the sea and hold the sun so we had longer days.

Conclusion: So do you agree that Maui is great mythical hero? With his magical fishhook to pull islands out of the sea, hold the sun so we had longer days and his superhuman strength he was definitely a great mythical hero.