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Friday, May 27, 2016

Narrative

We have been learning how to write a narrative here is mine

Mysterious Mice

Not so long ago, there lived three furry and sweet mysterious mice called Sky, Snow and Cloud. Those three mysterious mice lived in the pretty leafy forest on a beautiful tropical island.

“Huu,” yawned Brownie. Suddenly bring! bring! The phone rang, “mysterious mice there is something in Mount Everest and you need to find what that something is!” “ Ok boss we will be available,”. “We have a mission you guys let's roll,”.

Puff puff “ climbing…. u..p…..Mount….Everest… is…hard,” puffed Cloud. “I know, but we've got to keep on climbing,” huffed Snow. “Why can't we stop and have a rest,” asked Cloud. “This may be tiring, but we've got to keep on climbing to investigate the mystery cave,” Sky told the other two mice. “We are almost at the top!” shouted Snow.  Finally the mysterious mice arrived at the top of Mount Everest.

“Right let's investigate,” shouted Sky. “Let’s go!” shouted Cloud and Snow. Finally they found the great cave. They entered the cave on Mount Everest to find it was filled with crystals shinning like the sun. Rumble, Rumble. “Hey is that your puku rumbling or am I hearing things,” whispered Sky. “It’s definitely not my puku,” whispered Cloud and Snow. “Then what is it?” There’s only one explanation, a Monster!!!!!!!” shouted the mice.

“I'm very hungry for three little mice,” screeched the monster. “Do you think those three mice are us?” they all whispered. “Yes,” screeched the monster. The three mysterious mice ran as fast as they could down the mountain, with the monster close behind. They weave, dashed and darted. The monster started puffing. Suddenly he stopped. The mysterious mice were lucky because they were faster and fitter than the monster. The mice stopped running and walked slowly to the bottom.

“Wow climbing down Mount Everest was better than climbing up,” Snow told the other mice. “I know,” Cloud explained.


Monday, May 9, 2016

swimming self assessment

Visual pepeha.


This is my visual pepeha.

Team Awa each made one about themsevles.

The mountains are green the korus are blue and the back ground is yellow.