Kia ora, Last week in poetry we created a poem about weather using similes. We had to create one like, as and than simile about one weather form we choose. I did my poem about snow. Here it is.
Hi Louisa, My name is Ronan and I go to Ohaeawai Primary School. I really enjoyed your poem. I loved the way you have made your poem out of similes. Have you thought about creating some more pictures to at more colour to your poem. Blog you later.
Hi Louisa, My name is Ronan and I go to Ohaeawai Primary School. I really enjoyed your poem. I loved the way you have made your poem out of similes. Have you thought about creating some more pictures to at more colour to your poem. Blog you later.
ReplyDeleteHi Ronan, thanks for the comment. Thanks!
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