Creative Writing

Kia ora bloggers
 At the end of last term we started writing adventure stories. My story is about a cat going to Sydney, Australia. The cat's name is Kedi. He is adventurous, has some brothers and lives in Indonesia. Sorry the photo couldn't be copied. I hope you enjoy.

Kedi in Sydney

Chapter 1: Thoughts

There Kedi was - starting to work his life out as he walked the streets of Indonesia.
Scattered around were his brothers Iggy, Manchester, Indah, Berantakan, Keranjang and
Ngantuk. They each had their own cat profiles/passports.

Name: Kedi

Age: 5

Animal: Cat

Siblings: Iggy, Manchester, Indah, Berantakan, Keranjang and Ngantuk

Birth date: 20/04/1995

Personality: Adventurous

Name: Iggy

Age: 4

Animal: Cat

Siblings: Kedi, Manchester, Indah, Berantakan, Keranjang and Ngantuk

Birth date: 3/012/1996

Personality: Funny

Name: Manchester

Age: 6

Animal: Cat

Siblings: Iggy, Kedi, Indah, Berantakan, Keranjang and Ngantuk

Birth date: 6/01/1994

Personality: Sleepy

Name: Indah

Age: 7

Animal: Cat

Siblings: Iggy, Manchester, Kedi, Berantakan, Keranjang and Ngantuk

Birth date: 1/09/1993

Personality: Scared

Name: Berantakan

Age: 9

Animal: Cat

Siblings: Iggy, Manchester, Indah, Kedi, Keranjang and Ngantuk

Birth date: 19/06/1991

Personality: Smart

Name: Keranjang

Age: 5

Animal: Cat

Siblings: Iggy, Manchester, Indah, Berantakan, Kedi and Ngantuk

Birth date: 20/04/1995

Personality: Arty

Name: Ngantuk

Age: 8

Animal: Cat

Siblings: Iggy, Manchester, Indah, Berantakan, Keranjang and Kedi

Birth date: 9/11/1992

Personality: Happy

Thoughts were racing through Kedi’s mind as fast as the time he killed a mouse on
Saies St. That was a good time he thought, as he went off track into his gila mind.
“Wait where was I?” Kedi said with a shock. “That’s right, I was planning my life.”
You may not have figured this out yet but Kedi had different ideas from his brothers. He wanted to be the first cat to cross the whole entire planet. So cross the planet he shall.

Chapter 2: Shock

Kedi went to sleep late that night. Why? Because his worst nightmare had just come upon his racing bijaksana mind. This nightmare was so dark, so scary and so creepy. This exact nightmare was...

He had to tell his family the news! Dun dun dun…

Kedi woke up with shock from a nightmare about telling his family the news. He had never even thought twice about how much this would scare him. “I mean it was only one nightmare, what if I had the same nightmare over and over and over again but each time it got creepier?” said Kedi to himself. Suddenly his confidence spiralled down. But, deep down inside Kedi still had the courage to tell his family and complete his dreams of crossing the world. The next day he didn’t pack his bag, instead he went straight to his family. “I’m going to cross the World” Kedi quickly said to his family. “Woh, woh, woh speak slower chippy cat,” said his Dad. “Ok, I’m going to cross the entire planet,” mentioned Kedi shyly. “What, that’s awesome, we're so proud of you,” all of his family shouted. This definitely isn’t the reply Kedi expected. His family all gave him a hug and left Kedi alone to go and pack for his big adventure.

Chapter 3: The beginning, well the beginning of the list

Kedi had just put himself in a very difficult position. He had written an extremely long list of stuff to pack. It was so long that he thought he could make a world record for the longest list in the world. You may not think this list is long, but for a cat it is. As Kedi was packing his bag Manchester came rushing into Kedi’s tree and flopped straight onto a branch fast asleep. Kedi carried on packing. He aimed to leave his tree at 6am sharp. It started to rain so Kedi took his bag under a big leafy branch to stay dry. Not the kind of start he wanted for his amazing adventure. He was starting to tick off things on the list until he saw the word ‘camera’. He hadn’t seen that camera for days. Kedi only had half an hour till he had to leave. He searched everywhere. Under his blanket, around the built in kitchen. He couldn’t find it anywhere! Then he saw Manchester. Kedi looked under Manchester and what did Kedi find, his camera! He walked over to his bag and in went the camera. Kedi was starting his adventure at exactly 6am sharp.

Chapter 4: Plane trouble!

Clip, clap, clip. Kedi was running onto a plane to go to Sydney in Australia! Rmmm the engine started. Rmmm the plane was on

the runway. Rmmm take off! Kedi was surprisingly in the business class room. There, waiting for Kedi was a seat glimmering in the sunlight praying that Kedi would sit on its comfy, puffy seat. Plop! Kedi was on it in a jippy. “This is what I’ve been dreaming about,” Kedi said falling to sleep. Ring ring! He was awoken by a bell. He looked over his shoulder and saw a cart full of food. “Hello… Cat!!!” “There’s a cat on the plane ahhh!!!” Screamed the flight attendant. Kedi pounced around until eventually he found the animal area. “Please tighten your seatbelts we are going in for a landing…”

Chapter 5: Watch out Sydney here Kedi comes!

Sizz, sizz, sizz! “Ahh!” screamed a flight attendant running into the controls room. “The wings are on fire! Make a call!” “Hello guests please stay calm but we are going in for a CRASH landing,” called out the pilot through the speaker. “Anybody, anyone, everybody SCREAM!” Yelled the Soca Boys. Everyone just had the instinct to scream. They never even listened to the Soca Boys. Kedi, wondering how to escape in time had to go for the first plan that came into his head. He rushed around unlocking all of the other animals and told them to follow him through the hatch to the top of the plane. They listened alright. “The door, it’s open, jump out NOW!” Yelled Kedi to the other animals. POOF! The plane burst into flames at the exact moment they jumped out. It looked so cool as they jumped out acting like they were movie stars. But, actually they were risking their lives for entertainment. No, literally they were, someone was videoing them at the time. “Good job troop,” he said to the animals as if they were in his army at war. Kedi walked out to the harbour not knowing where he was going…

Chapter 6: Hallelujah, hallelujah, hallelujah!

Kedi walked into this curved building on the harbour of Sydney not knowing where he was. Kedi was so tired from his adventure so far he fell into a deep sleep in this sort of auditorium with hard concrete walls. 2 hours later… “HALLELUJAH, HALLELUJAH, HALLELUJAH!” Kedi was woken up by a loud noise coming from what he could see a lady, an opera lady. “BE QUIET!” Yelled Kedi. But from what humans could hear it just sounded like this “MEOW MEOW!” For some reason the security was called. Right about now you would think that Kedi would have scrambled but no he waited until the security came. “Bye, bye have a nice concussion,” Kedi said and moved out of the way so the security would bonk their heads on the hard wall. Kedi ran as far as he could looking back at what he had just done. He didn't notice that he had just jumped into a submarine…

By Louisa Joyce

Translations

Indah-Beautiful

Berantakan-Mess

Keranjang-Basket

Ngantuk-Sleepy

Gila-Crazy

Bijaksana-Wise